Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?
In social relationships, friends are the most basic relationships with each of us. friendship is a two-way emotional relationship between people. friends can be one person, two persons, or many people. they are the people we get to know, come into contact with and eventually get close to. friendship is very meaningful and special to us, but it is also incredibly complicated. A good friend will be a friend who listens, understands and is always there for us in difficult times. however, if a friendship is filled with deception, exploitation, and selfishness, that friendship will quickly weaken and fall apart.
Life has its ups and downs sometimes and we desperately need a friend who listens. A good friend will be there for us, listening to our story no matter how bland it may be. like a diary, they understand our mood and empathize deeply with us. they nurture friendships with love, patience, care, and understanding. Therefore, find ourselves a friend who always cares and listens to what we have to say. friendship will also be stronger when understanding each other. Just listening is not enough, friends also have to understand who we really are, they understand and are willing to accept both our good and bad. they understand our flaws, don't force us to change into someone you don't want to be, but instead inspire you to change and become a better person. True friendship is based on voluntariness, only when we are willing to accept all aspects of our friend can we maintain a lasting friendship. In addition, a good friend is someone who is always there for us when we are in trouble. they will cheer us on and help us, they will go with us to overcome that difficulty, not leave us alone.
However, nothing is forever with time. when a friendship contains deception, exploitation and selfishness, that friendship will fall apart. deception is like a rift that slowly weakens the relationship. when a friendship is deceptive, the relationship is no longer built on trust. it will be the cause of conflict and disappointment in friendships. Besides, exploitation is also one of the causes of broken friendships, a friendship that only one side gives and the other side only knows how to receive, it will not last. In addition, friendship should not contain selfishness. Once you're friends, we should sympathize with each other, don't always think about ourselves. if we keep thinking about ourselves without caring about our friends then they will feel hurt and the friendship will also weaken over time.
Friendship is a very complicated thing. friendship is not something that is cultivated on both sides. In friendships can begin and develop spontaneously. if we have good and really sincere friends, then we will have a meaningful friendship. however, if that friendship is a bad relationship then we will be affected by the negative things in that relationship. if we want to maintain good friendship, then we should treat our friends sincerely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 497.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99195171026 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9921039311 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444668008048 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7059975741 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0606060606 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 8.67935871743 288% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244361909059 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079727542881 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726351153475 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174869138315 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547809959667 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.