In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. Give the advantages and disadvantages
In near future, most transportation media will operate without drivers and only commuters going to be inside while travelling to their destinations. In this essay I will look at both advantages and disadvantages, but in my opinion, I strongly believe that the benefits overweigh the risks.
One of the significant disadvantages is that there will be higher unemployment rate with in a community. While developed countries might be able to tackle this issue by formulating new job opportunities it is unlikely poor and developing countries to cope this with same extent. Higher unemployment with unskilled workers will put additional burden on countries economy by increasing dependent population who seek for assistance from the government. Spending on uplifting lives will reduce the amount to be spent on development projects hence their financial statuses going to affect further as a nation. For example, significant number of working force in Sri Lanka has become trishaw drivers so that it is the sole income for their families and losing their jobs is a disaster.
On the other hand we can avoid major accidents by using driverless vehicles. Human error cannot be completely eradicated even with the best of hands. In addition consumption of alcohol and other sedating agents will clearly affect the judgemental capacity of individual driver hence become more prone to further mishaps. However, driverless vehicles will be process through major technical advancements, so that it is unlikely to come across with tragedy. For instance, Japan is maintaining driverless bullet trains for decades without major accidents.
In conclusion, it is inevitable that modes of transportation will embrace the latest technology more and more, which might cause new problems like higher unemployment rates especially in developing nations, in my opinion, I really feel avoiding major accidents in roads through ultramodern technology is more beneficial than presumed disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...d workers will put additional burden on countries economy by increasing dependent populat...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...dicated even with the best of hands. In addition consumption of alcohol and other sedati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54785478548 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07750776378 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8354864464 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158405038908 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620686085736 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441373073176 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916024012052 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408006818111 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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