When the cars,buses and trucks will be driverless in the future, it will be a fantastic world by this evolutionary development since this will improve many aspcets of our lves. Althouth there would be some negative effects, the advantages of driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages of that as my concern. I will elaborate on my views as follows.
First of all, as there will be no driver in every vehicle, people's life style would be upgraded to a new level significantly. The drivers will be freed which means all the people in the vehicle can do more things. Individually, the drivers alone can have meals, make phone calls even prepare the ppt files on the laptopin their own automobiles. As for the buses, people in them not only can have meetings together, but also can have dinners, too. So the life will be changed beyond our imagination, more things no matter work or life business would have been done in the vehicles.
Moreover, there would be no taffic jams even accidents in the future due to the all driverless vehicles. Because the artificial-inteligence-based driving technology will be applied in every vehicle.All of the cars,buses and trucks will be handled by these computers. The vehicles will be drived much more fast with few stops on the road since the the directions would not be bothered by other automobiles due to the computations of AI traffic network. Meanwhile, as all the driving work can be controlled by the AI, there will be few traffic accidents since all the danger will be evaded by the AI. The emergence of this technology has already shocked people when we see the FSD on Tesla todat which can prevent accidents in advance. Thus it is predictable in the future there will be much less traffic accidents and all the passengers' safty will be assured.
We can imagine some disadvantages of the disappearance of the drivers in the future, however.This disappearance firstly means the professional drivers will lose jobs,like the truck drivers.They have to work in other fields due to the driverless world in the future.At the same time, the driving lovers will lose their hobbies,too. Since maybe the F-1 racing would be a totally robots competition which would not have so many fans like today.
To conclude, even there are some disadvatages of the all driverless vehicles in the future, there are much more advantages of that.It will improve people's life greatly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, as for, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 32.0 7.85571142285 407% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95823095823 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99644520116 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46683046683 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2981835111 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.705882353 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442494719622 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166843926994 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104603968007 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263775284405 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097793162307 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.