There are necessities and significane to take risks in professional as well as personal lives. However, I do not totally agree with this opinion since there are different criterions on risks and moreover, not all the consequences of the risks people can afford, no matter at work or after work. We all live only once, be brave but not be arbitrary. I will elaborate my views as follows.
First and foremost, people need to take risks. In ones' career, there are lots of challenges and risks we have to confront with. You have no choice but to take it and find the most suitable instead of best solution for them. We need not only the bravery and confidence but also the intelligence and experince to handle them. There are lots of risks people took in history. If there was no people to try tomato for the first time, we may still recognize this fruit is poisonous. Moreover,columbs as the great explorer, without his risks, the america continent may be found hundreds years later which may rewrite the history of the US. On the other hand, we need to know the risks at work, if the risk will do harm to people whoever they are, it would not be advisable to do. So here we need to apply the right standard to evalute the danger at work, not just try it directly. If Putin would like to talk with Zeliensky with the state affairs instead of the invasion of Ukraine, there would be no people in both Ukraine and Russia died from the war this year. Maybe there are tricky trouble in Russia, but the cost of the war is much more than that as my concern. At this point, politicians' wisdom and experince should work on handling these problems, not risking soldiers' lives in frontline.
As for the peoples' personal lives, that's the same story when they are working.Because work and life are extensions of each other, no one can work with out life and vice versa. However, people should be more prudent when they plan to take some risks in their personal lives since it could break their work and life both. That is, as my pointed out, people should make more specific plans if they want to try something dagnerous. The most important consideration is, whether can one take the incoming result both good and bad. Since this is our life, if we take risks in our personal life, one may hardly recover from the accident the risk may bring in. Like a married man want to date other women for a happy life, his life would be a tragedy due to his risk is lack of responsibility for the family which may do harm to not only his wife but also the children if they have.Here as for the children, if a new couple can not give birth to a new baby due to their health condition, they can turn to doctor for professional help, like the tube-baby technology, this is certainly a risk, but the couple can handle by the doctor's professional treatment. This is also reasonable since they are on the right track of their life.
At last, people need to take risks both at work and personal lives. However, people should know most of the risks' outcome by their judgement, how to find the most feasible solution by their intellegence and exprince. That's the real value of our lives in risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 7.85571142285 356% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2596.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 577.0 315.596192385 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49913344887 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41381265516 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447140381282 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5990984142 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1923076923 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285249276867 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844904197589 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639161062223 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196533470041 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381260656655 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.