In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars.
do you agree or disagree?
In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars.
do you agree or disagree?
In all times people have been thinking about what is beyond our planet . However, nowadays humanity knows that the Earth is not a only one planet with life. Mars is one option that humanity see, and it is becoming increasingly difficult to stay on our planet, that is why authorities ought to spend much mote money on discovering how to start life on Red Planet. I absolutely support the idea of colonization of Mars and believe that it is possible nowadays.
Firstly, the Red planet can be a perfect fallback for all humanity if our planet is going to be destroyed for some reason. This means that, this could happen unless people become extinct due to a natural disaster. Therefore, the huge number of people will be alive and can continue our civilization and development in the future.Thus, Mars is the only one viable option of this theoretic situation.
Secondly, the fourth planet from the sun is a superb object for exploration about our and universes origin. Moreover, new resources can be found for improving the level of development. For example new fuel,elements for the periodic table,metals, which are efficient compared with what we have found. Hence, Mars is a great choice to open our mind widely and find enormous amount of new fascinating and useful things.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that it is quite important to discover new worlds, owing to the fact that exploration has always been an engine of progress for all the humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80565371025 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69492053816 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3304169361 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337788734251 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116103203321 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203148332583 0.0667982634062 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225897689564 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.272878145334 0.056905535591 480% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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