In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars.
do you agree or disagree?
In all times people have been thinking about what is beyond our planet. However, nowadays humanity is aware that the Earth is not the only one planet where the life flourishes. Mars is one option that people see, and it is becoming increasingly difficult to stay put on our planet, that is why authorities ought to allocate much more money to discovering how to commence life on the Red Planet. I absolutely support the idea of colonization of Mars and believe that it is highly possible nowadays.
Firstly, the Red planet can be a perfect fallback for all humanity, if our planet is going to be destroyed for some reason. This means that, this could occur unless people become extinct due to a natural disaster. Therefore, the huge number of people will be alive and can continue our civilization and development in the future. Thus, Mars is the only one viable option of this theoretic situation.
Secondly, the fourth planet from the sun is an excellent object for exploration about universe’s origin. Moreover, new resources can be found for improving the level of development. For example, new fuels, chemical elements for the periodic table, metals, which are more efficient compared with what we have found on Earth. Hence, Mars is a great choice to open our mind widely and find enormous number of new fascinating and useful activities.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that it is quite important to discover new worlds, owing to the fact that exploration has always been an engine of progress for all the humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89272030651 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67329734498 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.892267176 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157699593129 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521232501645 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048347464008 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851823145338 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614012402494 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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