Many people claim that printed newspapers and books will lose its appeal and people will tend to read books and newspapers online without purchasing. I totally disagree with this statement because reading devices are expensive and online books and newspapers hinder people from comprehending fully.
To begin with, nowadays, smartphones or tablets are too expensive that not almost people have their own. In more detail, many people are in poverty, they are unable to purchase for themselves a smartphone. According to a recent news shows that in Africa, most people are unable to buy technology devices for reading books and newspapers online, so they are only able to pay for printed books to keep themselves up-to-date. As a result, printed books and newspapers are still favored in some parts of the world.
Furthermore, online books and newspaper have curbed people from understanding fully stories or books. To be more specific, most people are losing their ability to understand fully a story or newspaper by reading online. According to a recent study, people, who are reading ebook or online articles, only understand for 30% to 50% of an article or story, while people, who are reading printed books or articles, can comprehend about 80% to 90% of a story. Therefore, online reading contribute detrimentally to our reading ability and our comprehension.
In conclusion, online reading could lead to many detrimental effects to us. Online books or newspapers may not only unaffordable but also they contribute negatively to our understanding and reading ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent news'.
Suggestion: recent news
...r themselves a smartphone. According to a recent news shows that in Africa, most people are u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29880478088 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85868164736 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8820164571 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311595537688 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11990452217 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749140109213 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203035147556 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076516447434 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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