In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

E-books are expected to be massively used rather than paper based ones. I completely agree with this statement, since it can enable to find all sorts of books regardless of their value and time of publication, also it causes less harm to environment.

To begin with, the usage of modern technology can help people to read unavailable, old and informative books. In the contemporary world, a variety of books are present at libraries, but most of them are kept there for years and under danger of being damaged. Because of this, it is hard for readers to take the book they are willing to read, so, if they are electronic then it may be way straightforward to fulfill their desires. In addition, there are priceless books of writers of the past, yet unfortunately, myriads of them are preserved in museums as exhibitions of the past and are not given to anyone. However, with the advancement of latest technologies, as long as these books can be copied as online, eventually it might give all the chances to be read.

Secondly, due to production of printed newspapers or books, a great number of trees are cut down. It means that if this process continues, deforestation might occur, which leads to the loss of biodiversity and soil depletion that can impair the current ecosystem. As a result, in the future, nature could not provide humanity with food sources, such as vegetables and fruits since the growth of vegetation may not be possible.
In conclusion, the availability of a large quantity of books and the reduction of environmental damage are considered as beneficial sites of e-books.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...o anyone. However, with the advancement of latest technologies, as long as these books ca...
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Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... might give all the chances to be read. Secondly, due to production of printed n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88970588235 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93064290218 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9199348978 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175954442846 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591268862872 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632882326757 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816978482976 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626363358053 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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