In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
We are living in the technology century which means technological innovation is rapidly developing day by day and expanding all over the world. Some people believe that printed newspapers or books will vanish in the near future because people can read free from the internet while some people are against it, they think that those will exist in the future. In my opinion, the benefits of the former point of view outweigh those of its latter.
First and foremost, it is beyond doubt that the internet is a huge source of information, and almost all types of data are free in the World Wide Web. After the appearance of the internet, not only students are doing their assignments through the web, but also people who are doing their work. It gives a great opportunity to access information about what they most need. However, the internet has plenty of false guidance so that people should always be aware that all data from social media are not true.
In addition, paper is made from hardwood trees. It is noteworthy to mention that it is about effects on the environment. Such as logging will be decreased somewhat if paper is no longer needed. Although some people think that books are a cultural heritage so we must save, also elderly people cannot access the internet, they do not use those kinds of devices.
To sum up, technological development has led us to a whole another level, it was noticed that paper newspapers are already decreased compared to couple of decades. Nowadays, people tend to gain information more easily and free from wherever they are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83703703704 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49854827534 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9825600276 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160317355746 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483245737698 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599779616416 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939610850432 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381736510157 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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