In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It was noticed that some people prefer buying a house, others believe that renting a home is a better choice. Perhaps, I think that case depends on the country, there is a huge difference between owning and renting a home. I strongly believe that buying a home is absolutely the right decision to not only be financially but also be comfortable.
First and most, people want to own everything, it is an animal instinct that human beings have a desire to make something of their own. The two main reasons for buying a home are related on mentally and financially. If you own a house, you will feel more stable than living in someone else's house. Moreover, there will be no pressure from the tenant.
On the other hand, renting a place to live has been popular among the young adolescents recently due to a monthly fee. They prefer to live in the center of the city so that most of them cannot afford to buy houses, they choose to rent it usually. Especially in my country, it is hard to find good quality accommodation situated downtown, and of course too expensive to buy it. Doing some calculations, the monthly rental house fee will be huge in a few years, so many people think that it is a waste of money and that amount of money can afford houses and they don’t care even if it is located in a suburb.
To sum up, it is beneficial to consider the future. I believe that if you can afford a home, it is way better than renting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...care even if it is located in a suburb. To sum up, it is beneficial to consider ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, i think, of course, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4727127466 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.96494361 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6153846154 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234251252534 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765220009334 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488911141609 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136447528755 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05068437076 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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