In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people support that in the future, printed newspapers or books will be overwhelmed because online reading materials are more and more popular. Personally, I emphatically disagree with the aforementioned idea.
On the one hand, we can not deny some of the strengths of online reading. When we read electronic documents, we will not have to spend money on buying books or printing materials and can still read them anytime, anywhere thanks to electronic devices such as smartphones, computers, tablets, etc. To illustrate, if a student needs to find information about the law on environmental protection, he can look it up on the internet instead of wasting time going to the bookstore to find these related books. In addition, at the weekend, we want to go to cafe shops to sip a cup of tea and read books, we need only bring a compact smartphone or tablet instead of holding a thick book.
On the other hand, although there are a lot of digital books which are free, some documents are not accessible without money. A huge number of important electronic documents which are copyrighted by the producers require readers to pay a fee in order to read them. For instance, websites learning IELTS such as DOL.vn or Thanh Loan Ielts charge users when they want to refer to the correct answers and detailed explanation of the Reading or Listening section. Moreover, reading online does not help individuals have a visual depth about problems mentioned in documents. Because when they read printed books or magazines, they can directly highlight essential issues and express them in their own mind. Therefore, readers can understand deeply and remember longer than just skimming with smartphones or laptops.
In conclusion, even though electronic books are growing with the development of technology, I completely believe that not all online documents are free to use and printed newspapers or books play an important role in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ea. On the one hand, we can not deny some of the strengths of online reading. When we re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83149143562 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596875 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3892213505 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256737715594 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804946953488 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696564497872 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15365552293 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552847732041 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.