It is true that with the thrive of technology, it has improve our daily lives in many aspects such as chores, work and especially reading. I completely disagree with the idea that people would replace physical copy of news and books with digial version.
Every piece of technology are the same , they either rely on electricity or both electricity and internet connection. Digital news and books fallen into the latter categories, which they required a source of power and an access to the internet in order for you to be able to read. In contrast with physical copies where you can read them anywhere you want even without power and internet. Hence, it would broaden more places and scenarios for people to read. For instance, some people when they are commuting could not use the internet such as flying on a commercial airline or on a train, they could pass the time by reading a book even with the internet restriction.
In addition, downloadable copies of books can contain harmful viruses and malware. With technology kept on thriving so does unethical hackers. Nowadays, any piece of technology can be hack by a virus or malware that is kept hidden inside of an application. Thus, this could potentially lure in gullible or non tech savy people to download them and install these harmful viruses back to their computers or other devices. For example, in 2021, there is an ethical hacker, who is famous in the realm of cyber security, had demonstrated how he could infiltrate into another person computer by deceiving that person to download a pdf file, which is the common program for reading digital copies of a book, that contain a virus, in which he had implanted 5 minutes ago .
In conclusion, digital books or news will continue to rise in the near future but I believe it will not replace the traditional paper based version of books or news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
It is true that with the thrive of technology, it has improve our daily...
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Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...t with the thrive of technology, it has improve our daily lives in many aspects such as...
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Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Every piece of technology are the same , they either rely on electricity or both...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...ich they required a source of power and an access to the internet in order for you to be ...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...in order for you to be able to read. In contrast with physical copies where you can read...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in which he had implanted 5 minutes ago . In conclusion, digital books or news w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79439252336 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58248134616 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2142363269 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208429992953 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710244338302 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540997749798 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120753478615 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594694496323 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.