In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In next to no time, the convenience and popularity of technology leads to the opinion that there will be no one buying physical newspapers and books because people have the capability to read whatever they want online for free. Personally, although I acknowledge the flexibility of reading online, I tend to disagree with this view.
In the present days, although cutting-edge devices are popular among the society, not all citizens have the chance or faculty to use this technology for reading online newspapers. With the appearance of aging process people’s faculty of learning is incline to reduce, making the elderly people hard to approach with the news by reading through the internet. Moreover, reading online demands a smartphone or some high-tech devices to facilitate the process but this requirement can lead to a fact that not everyone has a device to use, especially the low income people.
With the dramatic growth of cyberspace and platforms, updating information through the internet has become easier also because of this convenience. Sometimes the news could be inconsistent when there are too many sources providing information therefore printed newspapers which are sorted carefully by the special organization could be the most reliable source of information for the readers.
In conclusion, because there are several groups of people who are not suitable for online reading and also unreliable of online information, physical newspapers become an indispensable good which can help everyone update news.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43697478992 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90557079462 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0764605544 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.75 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237856496479 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983948143093 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617522547757 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14302166766 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858139538419 0.056905535591 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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