It is true that many people use the internet to deyermine the informations or news that they want to know rather that reading books or newspapers. In the future it will carry on and will become more efficient yet i do not fully agree with this statement as books and newspapers have an influential place in our lives.
Using internet to find informations people want to know is a easy way and might be comfortable for people as they do not have to seek every book or every page of newspapers they can just write the title of the data then they will get what they wanted. Another reason for this is phones are cozy for carrying everywhere.
However, book and printed newspapers have a great impact in people's life. They all give us a joy and help us to broaden our horizons rather than getting datas from online websites.
But both ways have drawbacks too. For example people have to pay a payment for the internet when they use it. Also we pay money for books and magazines when we buy them. As i mentioned above carrying books and magazines may be uncomfortable for some people than carrying their phones as books and magazines are bigger than mobile phones.
To conclude, even the internet and technology are being better day by day there will be people who will read books and printed newspapers as they always help people to increase their ability of creativity and imagination. Only the people who have a great imagination, knowladge and creativity can make a great imlacts and they will create a bright future with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y on and will become more efficient yet i do not fully agree with this statement ...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ind informations people want to know is a easy way and might be comfortable for p...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ment for the internet when they use it. Also we pay money for books and magazines wh...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ooks and magazines when we buy them. As i mentioned above carrying books and maga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65808823529 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47288222893 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525735294118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4375762761 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328586231155 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116811766506 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867299471019 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195317194828 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765293165066 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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