Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
It is a proven theory that games play an inevitable role in the children’s physical and mental development. Many people argue that games are equally important for adult’s life too. This essay agrees to the statement for various reasons which will highlight in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, games help to the physical and mental development of every person. By actively participating in the game one can understand his weakness and he himself can master many new skills in his life. The person who engages himself in the ‘word game’ of the newspaper every day is an example. He can try to answer all the questions and for all the unknown answers he will dig himself in the books. So, like children the adults should actively participate in the games for their mental development.
Lastly, engaging oneself in any past time activities is important as it will help them to keep away their worries and work-related stresses. To cite an example, conducting a weekend football match or cricket match by organizations will help all the employees to throw away their stress and tension from the company. Moreover that the bond between employees increases and this helps the workers to work in a friendly atmosphere which will automatically increase the productivity of the company. Thus, it is inevitable for the mature person to engage themselves in games as children.
To put it in a nutshell, games play a pivotal role in both adult’s and children’s life. It helps them to gain knowledge as well as keeps them to be fit physically. So it is highly recommended to encourage adults in games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended encouraging'.
Suggestion: recommended encouraging
...m to be fit physically. So it is highly recommended to encourage adults in games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06691449814 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97695018736 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542750929368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5238555194 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214413041686 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806345537439 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727043789589 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140997004321 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812999828538 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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