Write about the following topic.
Worker often have to retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working for as long as they want.
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the advent of better health care facilities and nutritious foods the life expectancy of human beings are increased. In this scenario, the retirement age of the workers is an animated topic for discussion in these days. Many countries following the age of 60 or 65 for the retirement. However, some arguers believe that they should be permitted to work as long as they want. This essay supports this opinion for various reasons.
Firstly, many people are healthy and able to do their work even in their 60’s or 65’s. Those people should be allowed to work for how long they want. At this age of worker’s life they can help, the company or organization, to take some crucial decisions. For example, they might have encountered a lot of problems in their employment period and learned many various methods to tackle the issues. Problem solving and better decision taking ability are important to achieve success of any organization. Thus, the retirement age should not be 60’s or 65’s.
Secondly, due to advancement in health care facilities the longevity of human being is increased than in the bygone days. Thus, the number of elderly people in the society is high than the active young generation which will leads to less productivity. It will be a burden for the government as they have to support them with pensions and health care facilities. So if the person is capable to work allow them to contribute their part to ease the tension of the govt. Additionally, if they stay at home, without work, make them lonely and this will affect them both physically and mentally.
So, to conclude, a person’s physical or mental health strength not relies on their age. If a person wants to work after their 60’s or 65’s, it is better to permit them. This will help the individual as well as society in a positive way. It is high time, all the governments and concerned authorities should change the retirement criteria.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...th pensions and health care facilities. So if the person is capable to work allow the...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... help the individual as well as society in a positive way. It is high time, all the governments a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95166163142 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75642964064 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534743202417 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9313601786 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.95 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341777991044 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111445087146 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943654917597 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21942965088 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115054123315 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.