In present scenario,discrimination amoung the rich and poors is inclining rapidly however the reasons and solutions of this problem will be discussed in further segments.
There is a plathora of factors influencing my perspective, as the people who has strong financial support of their family they just persue with the same family business and become more and more richer whereas the poorer masses who earn just for their fulfillment of basic needs they cannot save much amount of money on thier regular basis moreover,goverment does not help the poor people properly due to increasjng corruption
Because everyone want to be rich but noone thinks about the needy people.For instance,people are becoming such greedy nowadays that they donot even help someone if he is dying with hunger.
Futher reinforcung my viewpoint,such major problem can be solved by taking some measures as government should stop judging the people with their financial status as for authority every human should be same because as books of laws say that every law is equivalent to every human being doesnot matter that he is a most richest person or the poorer.so the poorer people also should get the oppurtunities to be appointed on higher ranks whereas donations should be banned whereas marks should be given more importance rather than the donations.
To sum up,richer people are getting more richer only because of thier financial support as well as support of governments.
- n some countries, 18 old are allowed to drive whereas some countries do not allow people to drive until they attain an age of 25.As per you, what is the right age at which people should be allowed to drive a vehicle? 56
- The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming richer and the poor are growing poorer. What are the causes of this? what measures can be taken to reduce this problem? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , discrimination
In present scenario,discrimination amoung the rich and poors is inclining ...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'richer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: richer
...ame family business and become more and more richer whereas the poorer masses who earn just...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , goverment
...of money on thier regular basis moreover,goverment does not help the poor people properly ...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...but noone thinks about the needy people.For instance,people are becoming such greed...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...inks about the needy people.For instance,people are becoming such greedy nowadays that ...
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Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , such
...nger. Futher reinforcung my viewpoint,such major problem can be solved by taking s...
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Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'richest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: richest
...human being doesnot matter that he is a most richest person or the poorer.so the poorer peop...
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Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the richest'.
Suggestion: most the richest
...human being doesnot matter that he is a most richest person or the poorer.so the poorer peop...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , richer
... rather than the donations. To sum up,richer people are getting more richer only bec...
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Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'richer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: richer
... To sum up,richer people are getting more richer only because of thier financial support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as for, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23404255319 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9678036929 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.239547287 49.4020404114 442% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 307.5 106.682146367 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178059317863 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110100618484 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546450486024 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966295707336 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541786312161 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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