getting promotions are one of the biggest motivations for hard work in the modern workplace Why are people so driven to receive promotions what other factors motivate people to work hard

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getting promotions are one of the biggest motivations for hard work in the modern workplace. Why are people so driven to receive promotions? what other factors motivate people to work hard?

To begin with, for the majority of the people, getting a promotion is the first motivation to put all their efforts into their work. The primary reason for this is that everyone loves to be prized. When our efforts are recognized by others we try harder to enhance our performance. Therefore, promotion is a sign that the efforts of employees are appreciated and make them feel that they are valued.

However, there are several ways to motivate ways. First of them can be autonomy and trust. Employees always are irritated by the supervisors who tell them regularly what to do. If they are trusted to give an opportunity to work on their own. They not only stay motivated but also they can flourish in their roles. The second motivation reason could be a better work-life balance. In today’s competitive environments some employers may have unrealistic expectations from their workers and may force them to work overtime. This issue can have destructive effects on their personal life and they may lose their motivation in a long run. So most of the employees are looking forward to working for the companies that provide more flexible working hours that allow them to get enough time to spend with their families.

In conclusion, the most important reason why employees are motivated by promotions is that brings them a sense of recognition. Offering greater work-life balance and authority and showing trust in them are two important factors that could contribute to improving employees’ motivation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is is that everyone loves to be prized. When our efforts are recognized by others we...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...em can be autonomy and trust. Employees always are irritated by the supervisors who tell t...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ors who tell them regularly what to do. If they are trusted to give an opportunity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08835341365 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76059361055 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9087874287 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217478091219 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750779625423 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542963376784 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152700539435 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101468037115 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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