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Undoubtedly, advertisement's effectiveness has been high gets as an emerging issue in recent decades. While a product is convenient, so indivudual will buy it without any advertisement, i totally disagree with this statement which say the advertisement are unnecessary and only just a form of entertainment. This essay will critique both aspects in ensuing paragraphs with pertinent examples.
To embarks with, there are ample argument for this phenomenon, which stipulate why advertisement plays a vital role in morden era. First and foremost, advertisement is link between a customers and merchant. For example, if the trader promote their products via advertisement and also humankind are showing this advertisement on tv , poster and electronic gadget, hence general people are aware of different kind of products are accessible in the supermarket, which are mandatory for people, which live in this entire world. Second most effective advantages is the advertisement not only give information about product, but also give knowledge about health. Indeed, the logical and health related advertisement are extremely essential for 21st century. To illustrate, there are plenty of health related advertising broadcast on tv like Amitabh Bachchan's advertisement of polio which tittle is "DO BOOND ZINDAGI KE" and also various government approval adverts shown on tv such as, "JAGO GRAHAK JAGO" which help the local public to understand the health issues and many more.
On the other hand, there are several resones for advertisement are inessential. Firstly, manufacturers main objective
Higher profits. Advertisements are usually presented with false potroyals for consumers appeal, which could incentive waste of expenditure. For instance, for better sales , some food producers fail to maintain the additives and preservatives used on products when broadcasting advertisements causing the rise in food borne diseases and other gastroenteritis cases.
In conclusion, i recapitulate that although adverts are salient part of our world which provide information about product and knowledge about health, but somw advertisement are unnecessary which designate hazardous issues.
- If a product is good or it meets people needs people will buy it So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment to what exnted do you agree or disagree 89
- If q product is good or it meets people needs people will buy it So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8875 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25903527232 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646875 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.9938541453 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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