With a global culture evolving some people feel that traditional music is getting superseded by international music Do you agree

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With a global culture evolving, some people feel that traditional music is getting superseded by international music. Do you agree?

Globalization is a continuously evolving process that influences the culture of each country. Considering that many traditions are forgotten in favor of the international ones, including music or holidays, I totally agree with this statement.
Despite the fact that globalization has many positive aspects and it improved the global communication and what we know about other cultures, too many countries lost their own traditions. Music is a clear example of how this process is evolving nowadays. Traditional music has been replaced with the international one, because it is more suitable for the new generation. New genres have appeared, such as trap, rap or remixes and they seem to be more interesting for young people and not only.Traditional songs are played when it comes to a traditional context, for example a wedding or a christening party, while the new genres of music are adequate for every day activities.
On the other side, an important factor in promoting the international songs is the English language. Being the most widely spoken language on the Planet, it represents the base of world wide communication. English is everywhere in the modern society: in movies, on the radio, in music and it is even spoken in every country. In this way, it has become an obligation to know this language, so you can keep up with today’s development. This situation made international music become more and more popular, especially because many people are able to understand it.
To conclude, I consider that the variety and originality of international music is appealing for many people and because of this, traditional music seems to be forgotten, especially when it comes to the new generation, which always seek for new discoveries.

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Average: 7.5 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20921985816 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15050317218 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0324167013 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274109950415 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102508469976 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649535137428 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184811222394 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438194777654 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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