Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century & sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?
The 21st century is a glorious period for humans thanks to the utilization of fossil to fuel our industrial evolutions, but this also means that we are facing one of our greatest common enemies, which is global warming. This causes countless problems which include raising the sea level. This issue is global and over the century, it has caused problems such as decreasing the accommodation lands and weakening the coastal tourist businesses. Therefore, it is imperative that we must address these problems by improving our infastructures.
The rising sea level means that the ocean is invading the lands. This causes households near the beaches to face with flooding. As a result, these residents are forced to move their houses which is an exorbitant process. In addition, the invading water also adversely affect tourist attractions around the beaches as it causes the landscapes to change and the destinations themselves to be drowned in salt water . If these situations are not solved, they could desvastatingly impact the travel business and, therefore, the economy.
In order to tackle this rising problems governments should strengthen our defenses against flooding by building higher dams. In additions to artificial ones, we should also plant more salt water trees whichs act like natural dams in crucial areas. These doings will curb the corrosion of the lands and hopefully prevent the damages. Futher more, we can also build houses to adapt to or float on the rising water in lieu of relocating. These houses should be long term solutions because if we can’t reverse the green house effect in the next few decades, scientists suggest that our dams will have little effect facing the ocean. Although it seems impossible but the possibility of this method is evidenced in Italy where a big portion of houses is built on water.
In conclusion, the raising of water level is a alarming global phenomenon and it can causes detriments to the coastal area, therefore, all of us via the economy. This is why all authorities should act swiftly to counteract these changes by enforcing flooding defenses and redesigning coastal buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s themselves to be drowned in salt water . If these situations are not solved, the...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nclusion, the raising of water level is a alarming global phenomenon and it can c...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...a alarming global phenomenon and it can causes detriments to the coastal area, therefo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17191977077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74132248734 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0069951053 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168078516183 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056568403351 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524980888832 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10151768347 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517537546728 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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