It is an irrefutable fact that humanity is facing an enormous issue- the increase in the globe’s temperature. In this essay, I will explain the fundamental reasons that caused climate change and suggest some potential solutions to this problem.
There are numerous causes of global warming that need to take into consideration. To commence with, the greenhouse effect is one of the main factors for climate change. Ever since the industrial revolution began, factories and eventually cars have burned fossil fuels such as oil, coal… releasing massive amounts of carbon dioxide and other gases into the atmosphere. Consequently, gases in the atmosphere are trapped and reflected, increasing the earth’s temperature. Likewise, the ecosystem plays an essential role in supporting life on earth, but deforestation is clearing the earth’s forest on a massive scale and became a significant contributor to climate change. As the trees, take a crucial part in absorbing the gases that cause global warming, fewer forests lead to larger amounts of CO2 entering the atmosphere and increase the severity of global warming. In addition, it is reasonable to say that human activities are in progress to heating the globe. Using too much electricity such as computers, TV, lights are listed as a prominent reason for carbon dioxide emissions.
The government might bring some solutions into action to solve the environmental problem. Firstly, the government can encourage people to use more renewable energy instead of fossil fuel with policies that reduce their taxes. Furthermore, managing the rainforests is a helpful way to replant the number of lost trees. Under the law, the government has the authority to ban those who are ambitious to destroy forests.
To summarize, the government needs to encourage their citizens and enact a new law to prevent the factors that cause climate change such as greenhouse gases, deforestation, human activities. In my perspective, I hope that we can all try to be “green” to save the environment, and shortly, the earth will bloom again with a shimmering sapphire ocean and a vibrant green of the mainland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, so, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30498533724 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96105502376 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7889178732 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141950014869 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444688036583 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683679772219 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717759709557 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489321842466 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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