Nowadays, people from all over the world are now facing climate change which impacts too much on our environment. In this essay, I’ll look at some of the causes of this situation. I’ll then move on to consider what we can do to deal with this problem.
It’s clear that more and more trees are being cut down. Due to the population growth, more lands are needed for houses and constructions. Another reason for the overheating is that pollution from industry and other private transports have caused some diseases relevant to lungs, respiratory or even cancer.
Governments can help in several ways. First of all, they should manage forests by launching a campaign that involves less cutting and more planting. They can also encourage dwellers to use public transports more instead of using their own vehicles. Furthermore, cutting down on the use of electricity is also a good manner to save our Earth.
In conclusion, we can say that cutting down trees and pollution are some of the main threats to the natural world. Government should use their power to prevent and propagate for many people know what we’re facing. Each of us should join hands together to make the surroundings more “green”.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nvironment. In this essay, I’ll look at some of the causes of this situation. I’ll then mov...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...at cutting down trees and pollution are some of the main threats to the natural world. Gove...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, so, then, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61205473992 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1782430588 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119514860545 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407749987698 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456769906543 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731733060721 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509009453851 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nvironment. In this essay, I’ll look at some of the causes of this situation. I’ll then mov...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...at cutting down trees and pollution are some of the main threats to the natural world. Gove...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, so, then, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61205473992 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1782430588 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119514860545 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407749987698 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456769906543 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731733060721 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509009453851 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.