In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.
Discuss the advantages & disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
Thanks to medical research and the improvement of quality of life, more people live longer in some countries. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of living experiences and skills, chasing dreams but that is also lacking job opportunities and mineral deposits.
First, the longer they live, the more wisdom experiences they have. These useful experiences can help them to become a veteran teacher, an excellent president, for instance. Moreover, this understanding can pass on/ hand down to guide the junior who are facing difficulties on their life path. Furthermore, longer life expectancy enables the elderlies to enjoy life more. They can pursue their dreams, plans that they cannot carry out when they were young such as travelling or create lasting memories.
On the other hand, longevity is rising, which can lead to depletion of natural resources. Not only will deforestation be climbed more, but also fuel energy can be run out by operating machines and other things that promote better living standards. Besides, there will be a shortage of job opportunities for the young in the labor market. Because of the rising senior population, many youths cannot compete against the olders' life journey and rich knowledge.
In conclusion, weigh up both sides of the argue I would say that although the longevity is increasing which can have certain negative impacts on societies for shorting of young workers and natural deposit but the benefits that it brings to the future generation are impossible to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76457434459 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4793472578 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988866608908 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036885025481 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454082521727 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560530198824 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310137888988 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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