Nowadays, global warming has become a serious problem. Earth suffers glboal warming due to human activites such as air pollution and also natural processes, such as huricanes, volcano and floods. People and the goverment feel helpless In stopping such processes, however they can take a lot of measures to reduce harmful human actions.
To start with deminishing of air pollution in urban areas. One of the biggest problems which pollutes the air is the usage of different means of transport. However, we can reduce traffic, by using more public transport or just walk to work and thus we will help reducing air pollution. Another way in reducing global warming is by living a more natural friendly way. We should stop throwing rubbish, instead we can start recycling it.
Furthermore, goverments can help in reducing the global warming by reducing the dependance on fossil fuels and promote alternatives. Chemical industries should be punished, because of the great amount of harmful smoke which is being released in the ozone layer. The illegal cutting of forest, should be banned and the people who cut them must be punished. Another solution to prevent global warming is by stopping cutting and burning forest for cultivation. Also the goverment should encourage people to plant trees, which will be a small gesture, but if people plant trees at least one time a week, there will be a significant drop in global warming.
In conclusion, people and the goverment can help in deminishing the global warming. Our planet is our home and we should take care of it.
- Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production Some people think that as land is becoming scarce the world s meat consumption should be reduced What measures could be taken to reduce the world s meat consumption What kinds of problems 89
- The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 83
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?give reasons for you answer and include any relevant example 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, at least, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02692307692 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62605008582 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4802402395 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147152617454 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604856036793 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586203718403 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934777986245 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237880284767 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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