Nowadays it is known that the production of meat takes up more space than crop. Due to the fact that the availability of land is shrinking, a number of people think that global population should consume less meat. The meassure with which people would stop consuming so much meat, will be presented in this essay.
Firstly the goverment should do some changes in the menus in the school canteens, because the food that is served there is always 80% meat and 20% vegetables.For exmaple, vegeterian menus should be presented to schools. The main benefit of this measure is that students would be eating more healthy and this way there will be a bigger production of vegetables , than meat. Another great benefit is that the obesity in children may reduce.
Secondly, to reduce meat consumption throughout the world, one measure is to provide alternative products with the same sustenance and quality. For example there are some mushrooms, which give the same amount of proteins and vitmains as the red meat to the body. Growing this kind of mushrooms needs less area and room. However it could lead people to think that all kinds of mushrooms are eddible, because there are different types of mushrooms, which are poisonous and this could cause a lot of problems to a person's health.
Thirldy, another good measure may be to encourage people to be vegetarian. Although it is not easy to draw people’s attention in direction to being vegetarian, good advertisement and healthy diet suggesting to people may assist in reducing meat consumption. Moreover, this attempt may fail and be ignored by people.
In conclusion, i think that people may consider to stop meat consumption, when they really understand the problem here. Some attempts such as alternative foods and products, changing people’s diet, informing them about the current situation are some approaches which are suggested and i think that people may consider in stopping consuming meat so much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7477856155 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4710374649 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377811134057 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122388470392 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632559600719 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202729029716 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345947172287 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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