Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
It is true that the increasing global temperatures is putting enormous pressure on the whole world in these days and ages. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted by governments as well as individuals to improve the situation.
To begin with, there are two primary causes that plays an indispensable role in leading global warming.Firstly, the greenhouse effect is considered as a precursor to this tendency.this is due to the fact that a huge amount of heat-trapping gases released not only from the factory but also from vehicles. Furthermore, undoubtedly, cutting down trees illegally is also positively correlated with environmental degradation nowadays. By ways of illustration, the forest fire in amazon has caused severe damage to numerous species living there as well as the whole ecosystem around it. Therefore, not to mention the fact that the rest of trees in amazon cannot regulate the excessively carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.
Fortunately, several approaches could be effectively taken to prevent this problem from getting worse and worse. Firstly, it is of paramount importance to enforce more stringent regulations on minimize the amount of toxic gases. should factories and individuals as well try to break a law, the authorities have to impose the high penalty which acts as precaution to others. Besides, it is necessary for the government to have monitoring system which always follow-up the production process. Secondly, what it need to improve the air quality is planting more and more trees. As a result, the greenhouse gases in the atmosphere will decrease dramatically, curbing the possibility of increasing global temperatures.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for global warming, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3883161512 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10797338934 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6580367404 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113650227354 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354866119196 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300910301285 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729168544724 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021130814409 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.