Going to college is a dream for many people. Some do the work, graduate, and find good jobs. Other students, however, never finish their university studies. Write an essay about what causes students drop out of college. Use reasons and examples to support your answer?
One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of masses believing that going and graduating to university or college is desirable to find a good job whilst others claim that leaving out college is much more better. As a universal phenomenon is relatively dominant, it is undoubtedly that social scientists are learning more about its causes. They found that dropping out of university offers a wide range of demerits for youngsters today.
Finance initially turns out to one of the fundamental causes of leaving university for other purposes such as seeking a job. This could be proved by the fact that the fees of universities or colleges would transparently higher than high schools. Thus, it is seemingly difficult for students to pay for these kinds of fees and also other incomes such as necessities or entertainment. The decision for leaving out of tertiary curriculum would be acceptable for the number of people who consider the amount of money as a burden for their family.
More broadly, starting a new job in lieu of continuing to study at university has become a leading cause for younger generations who prefer ambitious and adventurous life currently. As far as it is concerned that there are numerous successful businessmen today as they have established their career path at the early stages. Wherefore reaching practical skills and experiences in real-world thanks to ample jobs they attained should be taken into account instead of spending time in universities.
Notwithstanding, every cause is relative to its consequence. Leaving out of the school curriculum can originate from financial or social aspects. Therefore, these result in various effects, eminently in academic fields in general. In a specific circumstance, professional jobs require the educational background as a proficient or skillful in order to attend in well-known or international companies. Hence, the appearance of university or college makes a significant position in providing a reservoir of academic knowledge for students which is essential for their future career.
All of this being said, although attending the universities brought detrimental demerits for students not only finance but also the academic platform, it will be advantageous for them to study continuously in academic environments such as university if they are not being in trouble with finance or other obstacles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34293193717 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12538805463 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573298429319 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5794182919 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5625 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254133201545 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770300505693 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569773410179 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138100610945 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525899168296 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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