The causes of obesity
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of masses believing that obesity has becoming a debated matter for both teenagers and adolescents. As this universal phenomenon is relatively dominant for several years, scientists are learning more about its external causes. They have found that being obese can stem from two chief reasons such as setting inappropriate diet as well as lacking physical activities.
An unbalanced portion, initially turns out to be one of the fundamental causes which makes the rate of youngsters suffering obesity increasingly. In a specific circumstance, there are more and more people prefer consuming fast food or packed food to gain weight considerably comparing to the past. Thus, this tendency will probably make a great contribution to the growing dependence on these unhealthy foods then some cardiovascular diseases or stroke can occur gradually. More broadly, the lack of physical exercises such as playing sports or regular movements would transparently result in obesity. This could be proved by analyzing our daily schedules in which influence profoundly due to working conditions or even preferences of entertainment these days. As a result, people in the hedonism era tend to live an inactive lifestyle and it is difficult for them to break bad habits in order to avoid being obese.
Notwithstanding, every cause is considered relatively to its consequence. Being obese at least in some cases can stem from environmental aspects. Thereby, these enable us to investigate some ingenious remedies thanks to medical researches.
First and foremost, establishing fitting portions on a regular basis would help to avoid the excess of food we consume every day. After that, monitoring our progress should not be underestimated. Since observing weigh regularly and making note of weigh in a diary will help to control and adjust systematically. Eventually, these practical methods have offered a healthier lifestyle to younger generations currently.
All of this being said that, although these adverse effects could originate from preferable and external decisions of being obese, if people are more aware of and persistently investigate approaches of diminishing the rate of obesity, citizen’s life expectancy will be longer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, at least, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45152354571 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11392580886 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637119113573 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7075182467 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132873626105 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430706976335 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737360016679 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076046030802 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699609981274 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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