Good facilities can be found in cities but not in countrysides. Therefore, new doctors and teachers should be sent to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent years, the living condition has been never ceased draw public attention and provoke debates. Albeit, general compulsory at the first sight, the issue as to whether government should assign new doctors and teachers to rural areas remain controversial. I am supportive to this policy because reasons in the following essay.
Firstly, it is important to recognize that hospital and schools in rural areas which is so understaffed that could be result in snow-ball effects. Needless to say, in human hierarchical demands, the demand medical and educational services is primary. However, the requirements has not been satisfied because serious shortage physicians and teacher in countrysides, leading to consequences that should be take into account. For example, because the limited access to health care services and education, rural citizen is always among the most disadvantage group in social, because indicates that illiteracy usually accompanies with poverty, severe diseases, rampant crimes and social chaos. This example indicates that authorities should allocate graduates to remote areas as a temporary solution to problems.
Secondly, another benefit obtained from this policy is interests to doctors and teachers. Many may argue that physicians and teacher will be have brighter careers prospect in cities. This argument could be true to some extent. Nevertheless, the indicates who in the same race for single positions, specially vacancies are more fierce competition because it usually set hight standard for applicants like doctors and teachers. It its common that remote areas is characterized by lack of novel technologies and state-of-the-art devices where working environment is suitable for fresh graduates with promising careers path, given that job sources are more plentiful.
In conclusion, under no circumstances should people criticize the policy distribution practitioners and teacher to remote areas. Given that it is beneficial, crucial for both the rural civilians and new graduates as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has never been
... the recent years, the living condition has been never ceased draw public attention and provok...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ompulsory at the first sight, the issue as to whether government should assign new doctors an...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taken'?
Suggestion: taken
... leading to consequences that should be take into account. For example, because the ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...y is interests to doctors and teachers. Many may argue that physicians and teacher will ...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'careers'' or 'career's'?
Suggestion: careers'; career's
...able for fresh graduates with promising careers path, given that job sources are more p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73114754098 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96925751507 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4726454394 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.533333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144214869831 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489743004575 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05010399953 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824078158267 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113241183161 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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