Nowadays, education plays a vital role in every individual life. And if the government builds a new university in my community, it will have some benefits for the local student here, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of a new university in my hometown and provide a logical conclusion.
The two main advantages of building a new university in my community are that students can stay with their family and generates more chances for the student can pursue their dream. Firstly, by building a university in my hometown, students need not live far away from their parents and less effort to reach the destination of their studies. They can focus on the knowledge that is reinforced in university and do not care about their lives. Secondly, there are many poverty families that always try to work to their children can study an educational advancement. But their university is very far away from their home, so students cannot go to study and cannot pursue their desire like other students. Therefore, this is a good chance for them to can study at university to get a high-salary job.
But building a new university in my community also has major disadvantages like a student will have a passionate lifestyle. For instance, building a new university, makes students depend on their families. Since they always stay with their parents, they have no chance to get out of their safe zone. Having a novel experience can help them to know which fields of their job suit them best.
To conclude, while building a new university in my hometown may have some negative aspects, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant positive aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79002059764 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5079186498 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231298375128 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991225141305 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830439939669 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166749726428 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381235884631 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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