A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?
Crime is a serious problem that affects people’s daliy life in many countries. Obiviously, people will feel unsafe if they lived in a society with high crime rate. Therefore I agree that the government should put citizens’ safety and stability in the primary place even if other aspects such as social warfare will be slightly effected.
On the one hand, ensuring the personal safety of its citizens is one of the significant responsibilities of a functioning government. The government not only has responsibility to consist a well-organized and responsive police force to protect citizens, but also has its duty to establishing and improving the legal system of country. Moreover, to increase defence can make sure every citizens’ chance to live their life. Some people will said that people can protect themsleves and thus it is wasting money if government paid for defence. However crime tends to affect lower-income areas more than affluent areas and therefore if the government ignore their citizens’ safety, then not every individual have freedom to pursue their dream.
On the other hand, making sure citizens' welfare is also the main work of the government, and improving welfare can make the country more stable to some extent. However, perfect welfare sometimes breeds laziness. Some people don't work and just want to live by benefits. I think the government can spend money on public facilities or security systems by reducing the expenditure on welfare. This can not only improve the sense of national security, but also promote more people to work and improve the economy
In conclusion, I believe it will bring more benefits for country if the government increase the investment in defence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: protecting
...l-organized and responsive police force to protect citizens, but also has its duty to esta...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...ce to live their life. Some people will said that people can protect themsleves and ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...g money if government paid for defence. However crime tends to affect lower-income area...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... sometimes breeds laziness. Some people dont work and just want to live by benefits....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95542703163 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9369173372 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287683175863 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900598694818 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046339885198 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14784876954 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580542624295 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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