Sports activity is of crucial importance for kids just the way education is. Many children in schools are unable to participate in sports activities because of monetary reasons. Therefore, I personally believe that our government should shoulder such students during their schooling in sports.
There are lot of mental and physical benefits of including sports in early age while children are in school. To begin with, such activity increases focus and endurance levels in kids. For example, Cricket requires lot of strategy, planning and focus. Football for that matter requires good stamina and team work. Basketball increases focus to aim at the basket. Overall, different activities would build varied skills in children which are significant for their development.Including sports along with education is really balancing for kids. This way they can enjoy studies too and not complain. Hence, Government should bring in schemes or help schools financially wherein they include such sports at the early levels so that everyone could benefit from it. A lot of young talent could emerge because of this and they could represent our country in world sports events like Olympics.
On the other hand, people playing sports professionally or performing arts for the audience are usually sponsored by big companies. There would be no harm if government wouldn't support them monetarily because they already have number of private organisations providing them for their training, rehab, venue, price money, etc. Usually such events are well funded and they charge for tickets too whoever wants to see their event live on ground. In fact, private sports and arts events are a big business nowadays, therefore our Government money shouldn't be wasted for such foul practices.
Government should help welfare of the country and for that they need to take care of its young leaning talent in school. The more productive things are introduced in school , the more it helps in developing our young crowd which are the future of our country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Including
...h are significant for their development.Including sports along with education is really b...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...s. There would be no harm if government wouldnt support them monetarily because they al...
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Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...owadays, therefore our Government money shouldnt be wasted for such foul practices. ...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oductive things are introduced in school , the more it helps in developing our you...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29320987654 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68111784512 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4972853493 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30540131274 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917379818215 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636407065368 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179893831767 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586770610482 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Including
...h are significant for their development.Including sports along with education is really b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...s. There would be no harm if government wouldnt support them monetarily because they al...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...owadays, therefore our Government money shouldnt be wasted for such foul practices. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oductive things are introduced in school , the more it helps in developing our you...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29320987654 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68111784512 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4972853493 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30540131274 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917379818215 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636407065368 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179893831767 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586770610482 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.