The government should control the amount of violence in films and television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
In digital life, people expose plenty of kinds of movies and televisions and some violence movies can affect people awareness. Some people believe that the government should control those types of movies to cut the number of crimes in society. Personally, I do not entirely agree with this idea.
On the one hand, having some violence movies show a real society with trust. For instance, some producers make violence films with real things happening around us to improve people’s awareness about the wrong action. Rather than producing a negative effect on the audience, sometimes, these movies can educate them. Furthermore, it is very ridiculous, since some people talk that violence movies are the main threat to society. Violence in films or televisions can educate young people with the right or wrong action, and remind them that police always work better for public security. Consequently, this is irresponsible and foolish to blame the media for violence in their own society.
However, others claim that the number of violence in movies or television can influence young children and audience’s psychology. Some children become aggressive and eccentric after watching the violence in films for a long time. For example, the violent crime rate is more and more popularity in the world and the major is young people and immature due to they are not cognitive that whether the activities performed in these movies are true or not.
In conclusion, although some violence in films and television can affect the audience’s cognitive, I also believe that some violence in movies or televisions can bring some certain significant for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76880347712 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2660175366 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211942317208 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910835481619 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537589643482 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144320113136 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441488666326 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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