It is a common belief that a nation should produce all kinds of food for its citizen and reducing the importing food as little as possible. While some people agree with this idea, I also believe that this view has some benefits.
On the one hand, a country should become the self-sufficient supply of all kinds of food for its citizens because of some factors. First of all, creating more than opportunities for jobs for the unemployed. For example, by focusing on farming, planting, irrigation, a government can make lots of jobs for people out of work. Consequence, the government can reduce the unemployment rate and increase worker productivity in their country.
Furthermore, importing food cannot ensure the quality and freshness of food due to some reasons. First of all, transportation food in a long distance can damage food and it is not fresh as domestically farming food. Besides, some companies export their foods to other nations, this is a long distance, so they need to preserve food by some preservative ingredients. Therefore, toxic chemical content can exceed the criteria of health safety warrant. Consequently, this can affect people’s health.
In conclusion, although the best way to ensuring quality and freshness food for the health of citizens is self-sufficient on their food production, I also believe that a country should try to produce all kinds of food for their dwellers.
- More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 67
- Many people say that family is the most powerful influence on a child’s development. However, some people suppose that other factors (such as music, friends,…) have a great influence on children.” Discuss both views and give your opinions. 67
- Many people say that family is the most powerful influence on a child’s development. However, some people suppose that other factors (such as music, friends,…) have a great influence on children.” Discuss both views and give your opinions. 73
- Many people say that family is the most powerful influence on a child’s development. However, some people suppose that other factors (such as music, friends,…) have a great influence on children.” Discuss both views and give your opinions. 73
- Task 2: The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19130434783 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02673656196 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552173913043 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3354778905 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414113177993 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153201158133 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117829603663 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276976133643 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069847910302 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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