Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
An education are crucial to make successful life of children. However, it is not good for authority to spend a huge amount of wealth in science subjects as compare to others because all subjects are necessary for nation ‘s development. I strongly disagree with this notion because knowledge of computer is required for every field and arts is important for teaching.
The main factor to never support this view is that today is world is full with modern technology that is why everything is online due to this it is mandatory for all to have a knowledge about computer as well as nowadays computer is also a part of every field because majority of offices,schools,hospitals and other use computer for working so that is why it is important for children to get a study of computer education because this subject help them to find a good job and provide handsome income. In addition to this,software jobs are more and more popular among whole world, so that is the reason government should invest money equal on all subjects. For example, a Report given by newspapers tells that 10 out of 7 people choose software engineering jobs from whole globe and majority of software engineers from India.
The other reason to neglect this statement is that arts education is crucial for those who choose field of teaching because colleges and schools of every country required well - qualified and good educators for children’s growth because children are the pillars of nation. Moreover, some masses have interest in teaching and their desire to become a good trainer as well as instructors are also do efforts for progress of regions as a good teacher can build a good student, so it’s is necessary for regime to spend partial amount on every subjects. For example, doctor sarwapali Radhakrishnan was a good teacher in their days and did many efforts for the betterment of education after that he became the president of India and every year teacher day on 5 September celebrating in his memories.
In conclusion, although, science subjects are crucial for the advancement of technology and development, but others subjects have their own importance which can never be neglected.
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| 2019-10-18 | Palak gupta | 50 | view |
| 2019-09-09 | Kamal1993 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01648351648 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93202658304 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513736263736 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.093119863 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.6 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157442725136 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741952047363 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055311421915 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107241681486 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297122859347 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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