The government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Today, it is hard for us to imagine what the society would look like without the two most important transportation methods, trains and cars. However there is a long going argue about which one mean the government should focus on more than the other. In my opinion, they all have advantages and disadvantages, and the priority should be decided on what we are trying to achieve in the future world.
Railway has always played an important role in leading us into modern society. As the first high-speed transportation method ever developed on earth, they are still crucial to us in terms of both delivering the goods and the passengers. They rely less on human resource than the automobiles since two people are fully capable of driving an eight-cart train with tons of resources across the country, while maybe ten trucks that all requires professional drivers can only carry goods equivalent to one cart of the train. They still remain the cheapest option of transferring goods from place to place, being the best option to spend money on if the society still requires development.
However, if the country is already wealthy enough and most people care less about development but comfort. It would then be a great idea to focus more on building the roads. The biggest disadvantage of the railway is that they cannot access to the exact destination of request immediately. Nevertheless cars is a more precise way of travel, bringing the benefit of not needed for other kinds of transportation most of the time. In this scenario, roads are more important than railroads, as they have a higher demand.
Overall, I think every coin spend on both will be worth it, the problem is only how to choose in order to maximise the profit. In my opinion, a developing country should try to spend more money on railway, and developed country should definitely try their best to improve automobile network.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93788819876 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68870394273 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8140367077 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151016156668 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468723327678 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376064332146 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900383705815 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270556911987 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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