In the last decade, there was considerable debate over the funds which the government has allocated for encouraging of arts or public health and education. Meanwhile, these two sides have strong arguments, I would suggest that it depends on circumstances.
First of all, supporting art by the goverment is a good point for every nation due to only by art we can improve our society minds. Establishing of new art center seriously impacts for people basically for youngsters. For instance, by listening Beethoven classical music or drawing like a Picasso can contribute to peoples enhance their minds such as broadens public horizons. Consequently, If government starts to provide budget for the art it may lead some advancement of society.
On the one hand, others claim that they should spend money to support health and educatioanal system and it seems to me that it better idea . Because health and school always be the on top of the list.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads .To what extend do you agree and disagree with this statement? 78
- Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution Do you agree 78
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Disscuss both view 78
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing. 84
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, so, while, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84703918312 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738853503185 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3803834609 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307945383252 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110888941638 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508038473438 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169667406338 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02193764388 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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