Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Certainly, it is true that railways are the cheapest and safest mode of transport in comparison of roads. From my point of view, I agree with the statement to the full extent that government should expenditure on railways in spite of roads.
Pitching in the first area of discussion, railways are the most affordable means of transport. These carries load, either of industry or military, from one place to other even from one state to other. Moreover, the weight varies from 100 kg to 100000 tons. Many people, mostly middle class people, uses this public transport to go to their work. The railways are accessible to all age groups from children to elders. Trains are used for long journeys with more comfort like especially interstate trains, like satabdi express, Amritsar express and many more.
Furthermore, government can take start some trains, for foreign tourist, that can result in inflow of foreign currency, trains like 'The Royal Express'. This train is in use in the state of Rajasthan, where it give all the facilities and accommodation that a 5 star hotel gives. We will be able to see this type of trains in every state of nation in the following years. Many years back, Honorable Prime Minister Narendra modi ji has commenced the metro trains in the parts of Delhi and Mumbai. Consequently, this not only reduced the number of private vehicles on the road, but also proved helpful in decreasing amount of conjestions on the roads.
To wrap up, it can be said that railways are the better option than roads for th government to spend on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...use in the state of Rajasthan, where it give all the facilities and accommodation th...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, moreover, so, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54344897438 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.196196733 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163245092331 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055067336321 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919598714676 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13308084062 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116880238146 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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