Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's modern era technology is increasing day by day. With respect to technology there are more option in transportation are available than before. In which one controversial topic occur is that government should use money to improve railway facility behalf of road transportation. I agree as much as disagree on this topic and I will discuss further upon this.
There are many advantages of railways facilities. First and foremost is that railway is safest mode of transport compare to other. For instance, a report was be displayed by transportation ministry of India in which railway facility was second safest mode in transportation rated by people. Moreover, by using one mode of transport rate of pollution will automatically decrease. In other words, if many people use one mode of transport like railway and not their private vehicles on daily basis then the gas emitted by vehicle will decrease automatically. Moreover, by railway, people can travel more distance with less effort. Furthermore, people can get proper sleep while railway travel and in road transport they have to drive in their whole journey.
On the other hand, there are many advantages of road transport. Firstly, road transport is very convenient for people. For instance, in emergency situation, people do not have to wait in road transport. So people can travel anywhere and anytime by road transport facility. Secondly, road transport is affordable for everyone. For example, poor people have less money but have cycle or any other affordable vehicle then they can easily travel by road. Moreover, individual can not travel any place where railway can not reach, but by road transport it is possible.
To conclude, road transport have many advantages like convenient and affordable. Also, transportation by railway has many plus points like safety and less pollution which are not neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the safest'.
Suggestion: is the safest
...ies. First and foremost is that railway is safest mode of transport compare to other. For...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...re to other. For instance, a report was be displayed by transportation ministry of...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'cycled'.
Suggestion: cycled
...e, poor people have less money but have cycle or any other affordable vehicle then th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in other words, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26910299003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89757759077 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0312360615 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.05 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168061435133 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062256537793 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456845856382 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118716716997 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756180754941 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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