It is often argued that the most important to finance the public services than to spend a lot of money in arts , music and theater .I partially agree with this opinion , but i think allocate a proper funding of arts sector is also principal for society.
One the one hand, the government should finance public services in first place . Because the objective of community is to make easy life style for every person live in this country .They make a big budget in different vital sector such as education , health, and also public construction .Although , any sector have not enough money spending , many people feel this and try to change .For example , after the second world war economy of japan grew frequently as result of spending a total budget in the principal sector then satisfied citizens with life .That's why , it is important to spend a lot of money in the public services , however community should allocate a small budget for the arts sector .
One the other hand, the government should allocate a proper funding in music , arts , and theater which is much important to develop skills of human as well as to grow the think way .For instance,the arts sector eliminate religious idea and the bad think than developing the interaction in society .Despite the human feel anxiety in daily life , the arts sector change them.To summarize , the culture is so interesting with people than community should allocate a small budget to develop.
To conclude , I strongly believe that the government should allocate a big funding in public services and a proper budget in arts sector .
- The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 56
- All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity.This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for thisrise in obesity, How could it be tackled? 61
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The graph below shows cinema attendance by age group in Great Britain 92
- it is more important to have a good family than to have friends . Family can always compensate for absence of friendships.To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 52
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53448293363 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479400749064 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.717693036 49.4020404114 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.8 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.4 7.06120827912 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180956642477 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133842998225 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380637832614 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138849499499 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321872495308 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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