Governments make many rules to protect people from danger, for example, by making people wear seat belts in cars or not allowing smoking in public places. However, many people believe that there are too many rules nowadays. To what extent do you agree with this?
law is the basic foundation of any country. All countries should have thier own rules and regulation according to their need. However, public nowadays, think that rules are more than necessary. though many people believe rules are more than wanted ones i disagree to this statement because rules are basics for every activity.
rules are made to promote peace and security in the country so there must be rules. These rules tell people what to be done and what to avoid. it makes citizens disciplined and safe. For instance, smoking in public places may cause many diseases to people around the smoker but if rules are made not to smoke in public places than the government is protecting general public from possible harm.
it is always righteous to make rules becauseonly when laws are made public tend to follow them. Otherwise, one individual will not care about the consequences he might be harm himself and related others. For example,if a person has not wore seat belt while driving he may seriously injury himself, damage property as well as may hit someone walking on the road.
sometimes rules may be more than required which can be tiredsome and hectic for public but most of them are not. For example,making people to take repeated appointments for court cases, the number of visits needs to be kept minimal.
Although people might feel laws are more than required, authorities should impose rules in every possible way for all possible preventable dangers. this way citizens of the country can besafe and they can be protected
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96538461538 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46248479405 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3058740366 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3244496207 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102144427748 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082304284959 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175017184513 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922116015274 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.