I agree that Government ought to allocate money on constructing railways when compared to roadways as it reduces traffic congestion, air pollution and it is cheaper to travel.
Firstly, by constructing railways would reduce the traffic congestion during rush hours. Most people get to work or studies between 8 and 10 in the morning. Everyone hits the road at the same time and this causes traffic problems in the cities as many office buildings and educational institution are situated in the cities. If any road accident occurs during these busy hours, which would lead to a major traffic problem. In order to avoid these traffic issues, the government needs to increase the number of trains around rush hour as this would eliminate people relying on cars to get their work or post-secondary institution. However, it is the government's responsibility to make sure there are frequent trains to different cities, especially during rush hours.
Secondly, many people use their cars as a mode of their primary transportation as it easier and convenient. This leads to air pollution which causes some health problems. Air pollution has been a major concern in many cities around the world. One solution to reduce this issue is by encouraging people to use trains more often by reducing the cost of transit passes and increasing the parking fee. On the other hand, roadways are better for cyclist as it keeps our environment clean and it also helps people to their daily physical activity.
Finally, train commuters spend less money because they do not have to pay the parking fee for the vehicle especially in the cities as parking fees are skyrocketing for people to afford. In this scenario, it is more feasible for commuters to make use of trains. Adversely, some people start their work early or finish it late night, so they depend on their cars to travel as most trains do not operate late nights and early mornings. The Government should make sure that they deal with this issue by operating trains during non-rush hour as well.
To conclude, I agree that by constructing railways would definitely help to minimize traffic problems, air pollution and saves money.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 97
- Some people argue that secondary school students should learn a subject about international news while other people believe that it is a waste of school time Describe the both arguments and say your opinion 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...condary institution. However, it is the governments responsibility to make sure there are f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02762430939 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67576766721 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516574585635 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2835312714 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.058823529 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108122123651 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373260282851 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316695514901 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701278651199 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296138264583 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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