To maintain an effective transportation, both roads and railways needed. But i think roads play more significant role in the transportation rather than railways. This essay explains the importance of roads from different angles and some advantages of railway as well.
To begin with, roads are the easy and most reliable mode of transportation as, thorough roads we can reach every nook and corner of the world. In case of any emergency, travelling via road will help us to reach the location exactly while this is not possible with the railway. Trains are running thorough prefixed stations and cannot deviate its route though there is a emergency. For example, a person suffering from heart attack can easily reach the nearest hospital with in minutes by a car however, it is not possible by a train. Another important point is, the cost of making roads are too low comparing to railway track making. The raw materials for road construction such as tar and other things are easily available in the market. On the other hand, railway lines are made up of metals which is too costly and a scarce raw material. Finally, road accidents are less tragic than the train accidents as the vehicles on the road carry only a few pasangers but thousands of people will lost their life,if train accident occurs.
Despite all the above mentioned negatives, railways has some positive aspects as well. Firstly, travelling long distances always better in railways than roads. Trains can reach the distant locations very quickly as the trains run faster than the cars and buses. Secondly, the cost of travelling is too low since railway transportation operated with electric power which is less expensive. The cost of fossil fuels continuously rising and so does the cost of road transportation.
To conclude, road transport have more advantages than the rail transport. Thus, government should spend more money on building roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07255520505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70332094896 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596214511041 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9639553942 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130592263413 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482422552058 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456816371276 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946589828323 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218557739672 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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