Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people think that the government ought to allocate more of their budget to railroads than roadways. I completely agree with this statement because trains are faster and more environmentally friendly.
Firstly , investing in a modern train system will mean that people can get around a country faster. To put it another way, travelling by train saves time for the passengers since they are faster than cars and buses.Moreover, in most countries around the world, train fares are considerably lower than bus fares or taxi fares. A recent study found that after implementing Metro rail project in Dhaka, capital of Bangladesh, people can reach Motijil from Uttora within 20 minutes whereas it took an hour before.
Another point to consider is that locomotives tend to be less harmful to the environment than cars .This is because a train can carry hundreds of passengers and this prevents the hundreds of internal combustion engines, thus reducing the amount of carbon emissions. If this is repeated everyday over many routes ,the reduction in carbon footprint is highly significant.In addition, it reduces global warming. Recent research concluded that after introducing more railway routes in Delhi, capital of India, the carbon emissions were reduced by 35%. One of the main benefit of this project is that the levels of carbon dioxide has reduced dramatically because of the reduction in traffic.
To sum up, the government should expend more funds to railway systems and spend less on roads as this will reduce travel time and also be less detrimental to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.234375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75471542171 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9264584116 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159894626179 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636497948188 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604685774571 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112489441203 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643829625225 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.