Graduates who cannot find the work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them.
To what extent do you agree?
Applying to do a second degree is the advice for graduates who cannot find the suitable job with their field, than they take a job which does not interest them, I absolutely agree if the graduates continue their school for specializing their field. However, they force to taking uninterest job making them unprofessional employees in their work surrounding.
The graduates would continue their academic to second degree if they cannot find the suitable job with their academic field to deeply specialize. With deeper specializing they will get higher grade, and it will invite many projects and jobs which is suitable with their field becoming specialization. For example, there was a nuclear engineering bachelor graduate in Makassar who could not find any similar field jobs in 2009, so the graduate continued to the second degree for specializing the field. Then, many national nuclear projects came to him when the graduate acquired the professional title. Therefore, the graduates who cannot find linear job with their field are advised to continue their academic in next degree.
Having said that, the graduates who force working in not interested job will probably become them be unprofessional employees in their job environment. It is caused by many specific jobs and tasks which are unfamiliar with their field academic. So that they will not enjoy their job and not do the job unprofessional. For example, there was unfortunate fresh graduate in Pare-pare, Indonesia who was force working in unfamiliar job with his field academic in an independent company in 2013. So he didn’t full enjoy his job and make him not professional holding his job. Therefore, the graduate will have potential be an unprofessional employees if they work in not interesting job.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree if the graduate prefer to continue their study in second grade rather than academic field. Hopefully, any graduates who experience the same condition to choose specializing their academic field, so there are many professionals in this country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...find the suitable job with their field, than they take a job which does not interest...
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...n their job environment. It is caused by many specific jobs and tasks which are u...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'employee'?
Suggestion: employee
...ill have potential be an unprofessional employees if they work in not interesting job. ...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to specialize'.
Suggestion: to specialize
...experience the same condition to choose specializing their academic field, so there are many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, therefore, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30275229358 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91670985255 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43119266055 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2145502638 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402646494286 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165284912269 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102158619012 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283157235092 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085521782276 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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