the graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The chart provided demonstrates the variation in the birth rates of two countries namely Chine and the USA in the period from 1920 to 2000.
In general, the birth rate of both countries witnessed some fluctuation before a slight decrease. Besides, the statistic of the USA was higher than that of China in most of the years.
Starting at roughly 10% in 1920, there was some variation in the birth rate of the USA, followed by a bottom out at less than 5% in 1945. After that, the birth rate of the USA surged to 15% in 1950. The statistic of the USA witnessed a slight dip in the remaining years apart from two times steadily rise to about 12% in 1965 and 7%.
Regarding the birth rate of China, there was an upward trend to 15% before plunged, hitting a bottom of exactly 5% in 1940. Subsequently, the statistic of China stabilized from 1940 to 1945, followed by a surge, reaching a peak at 20% in 1950.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-08-17 | Hanh Dung Bui 05 | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, regarding, so, apart from, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43378874687 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6117924988 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277918518626 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128322962128 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660342524179 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181011704454 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466512832221 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.