the graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000

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the graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The chart provided demonstrates the variation in the birth rates of two countries namely Chine and the USA in the period from 1920 to 2000.
In general, the birth rate of both countries witnessed some fluctuation before a slight decrease. Besides, the statistic of the USA was higher than that of China in most of the years.

Starting at roughly 10% in 1920, there was some variation in the birth rate of the USA, followed by a bottom out at less than 5% in 1945. After that, the birth rate of the USA surged to 15% in 1950. The statistic of the USA witnessed a slight dip in the remaining years apart from two times steadily rise to about 12% in 1965 and 7%.

Regarding the birth rate of China, there was an upward trend to 15% before plunged, hitting a bottom of exactly 5% in 1940. Subsequently, the statistic of China stabilized from 1940 to 1945, followed by a surge, reaching a peak at 20% in 1950.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, regarding, so, apart from, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43378874687 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6117924988 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277918518626 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128322962128 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660342524179 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181011704454 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466512832221 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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