the given line graph depicts different types of activities which the older like to do in their leisure time.
What stands out from the chart is that watchinging tv and visiting theater were the most popular for senior citizens, but then both of them saw a decline. Ang another noticeable things is that there was a remarkable growth in the figures of hiking and surfing the internet although people spenttime on them the least at the first year of the period.
looking at the chart , we can easily see that there was a gradual rise without fluctuation in the percentage of people who interested in hiking. this figure increased by over 60% in 3 decades. Both watching and surfing experienced an upsurge during the third decate. however , before increasing rapidly , the figure for reading touched its lowest point at only 20% in 2000s.
In comparison, the proportion of Watching tv and going to the theater started at a much higher point than that of these others, at 60 and 50 respectively. During the next 20 years , Watching Tv had a small rise by 10% while visiting theater fell to a low at 30% in 1990s and then it went up slightly from 30 to about 45 at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62264150943 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51633892614 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3695740239 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920454476557 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354126609059 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298171842407 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565264466816 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159467779558 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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