With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their friend lists.
Do you think that this tendency helps people to find new friends or is it just a mean to increase their self-esteem? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.
Social Networking is an important part of every individual life nowadays. In this contemporary era there are multifarious websites and applications are available where people are trying to extend their network by making friends online. Albeit, number of persons are there whose friend lists consist of complete strangers. Although, I believe this behaviour of individuals have more benefits than drawbacks.
To commence with, we need to understand that in this modern world networking plays a significant role in order to achieve success. Moreover, this advancement in technology helps us to spread our network not only in our own country but on international level as well. Many small scale entrepreneurs are there who became friend with foreigners online, and then they establish their business in other continent. For instance, one of my colleague who became a friend with Danish citizen through social media platform who later invested in this dream project and helped him to create his own investment firm.
In addition, expending network socially also helps establishing personal relationship. We can learn more about different cultures, religions, and cuisines of various nations. Besides, many citizens have found their life partner through various dating applications and sites. Furthermore, as per the survey conducted by one of the European University, funded by private organizations illustrates that relations of couples who meet online are reliable than others.
To recapitulate, making random and unknown friends are more beneficial. It has helped countless individuals to achieve success both in personal and professional life. However, there are some risks included but comparatively they are extremely less.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd lists consist of complete strangers. Although, I believe this behaviour of individual...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to establish' or 'establish'.
Suggestion: to establish; establish
..., expending network socially also helps establishing personal relationship. We can learn mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67307692308 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97218615375 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.884611346 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228708023654 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670595680576 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558632165371 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123682310589 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719137772494 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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